Great Vision, Horrible Directing
Her outfits were gorgeous, and the concepts were extremely cool... but they just weren't communicated effectively. Some of the physics seemed incorrect also, in terms of the response to the impact from falling, and the ways the stars hung. Please do not stop making animation, but, take time and figure out ways to stress the most animate/interesting aspects of each scene. Having a 6 second scene of a girl walking towards a portal is grotesgue unless the way she moves is realistic (slowly creeping up, or her facial expressions change, etc.)
Hopefully you get what I am saying. I would love to see inside your mind because I get the feeling it is filled with creative things... and, er... beautiful women. :P But at the same time, art is about communicating those dreams/vision, and so you need to try harder to do that (because while no artistic expression does justice to any dream, I am sure that you could have done much better justice to whatever dream it is that was the drive behind this particular piece of art.)