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I think the bug sewed on the wrong end though...

I'm not a big fan of most of your other work, but this was awsome... even the way that bug scuttered across in the beginning, it was all so perfect synchronized with the song. This is a much higher caliber piece of work than anything you have ever done before, and it was awe-inspiring.

I love the commentary, I love the song, I love symbolism, I love the synchronicity - I love this flash animation. Awsome job.

Great Vision, Horrible Directing

Her outfits were gorgeous, and the concepts were extremely cool... but they just weren't communicated effectively. Some of the physics seemed incorrect also, in terms of the response to the impact from falling, and the ways the stars hung. Please do not stop making animation, but, take time and figure out ways to stress the most animate/interesting aspects of each scene. Having a 6 second scene of a girl walking towards a portal is grotesgue unless the way she moves is realistic (slowly creeping up, or her facial expressions change, etc.)

Hopefully you get what I am saying. I would love to see inside your mind because I get the feeling it is filled with creative things... and, er... beautiful women. :P But at the same time, art is about communicating those dreams/vision, and so you need to try harder to do that (because while no artistic expression does justice to any dream, I am sure that you could have done much better justice to whatever dream it is that was the drive behind this particular piece of art.)

Amazing, yet also amazingly not funny.

You are an extremely talented artist, and the beginning was hilarious... but then it got extremely painful to watch, extremely fast. I think that if you brainstormed some original ideas that you could create some amazing flashes. If you have trouble finding your muse, just, well, keep trying I guess... I am sure it is out there somewhere...

RenegadeClock responds:

Your review got extremely painful to read, extremely fast. Happy Clock Day!

Hands-down the best flash to ever exist.

This is every bit as great as any dream I could dream, and our words and are drawings never do justice to our dreams. This is the greatest flash I have ever seen in my life, and I get the feeling that it will be staying as #1 in my favorite for quite some time.

Can I ask you a question though, does having such great vision and dreaming such surreal things make you feel alone when left in this reality? The dreamer's solace is that s/he can dream, but that isn't enough...

Perfect reflection of the song

You are an extremely talented artist and I look forward to your future work. I hope that you make dark/gothic style stuff (not that this was especially dark at all), because I get the feeling you could kickass at it if you had the right kind of inspiration. The animation was perfect/professional quality, the video was short and sweet, and the way everything moved around was just amazing - the scenes felt REAL, and that is something that I've never seen in a flash on newgrounds. So be proud man, because you are seriously impressive... now only if you were darker... ;)

(BTW, now you have two animations in my favorites.)

So hilarious but also so stupid

A lot of this was just overwelmingly hilarious, but there was also a lot of really crude and stupid content that totally cancelled it out.

So yeah... if you edited it so that there was no sexual themes or poop jokes, it would be awsome... that really low grade humor, and the rest of it is just so hilarious, its a shame.

PERFECT 10

Its not as good as the first one, but NOTHING is as good as the first one.

I really like the part in the alley with the raptors. :-D

Keep up the good work, and you had better get one of those prizes!

Sorry if this is harsh...

That was more insulting to the Fallout series than Fallout: Tactics.

Nuff said.

(Though I would try to synch the voices, get a better plot or a plot period, draw in accordance with your skills, and fix the preloader/soundeffects you mentioned. Sorry if this is too harsh... I was just excited as I loved Fallout 2.)

Yaleck responds:

Thank you for the review.

I donĀ“t mind the harshness as long as it comes along with some advice:)

Awsome technique, boring plot

I like your other works a lot more. It seems like you got lost in the technique on this one and completely forgot about the plot. I just have no idea what the message is, and nothing in that animation actually creeped me out... I just found myself feeling sorry for the "scary man."

Your other movies are much more creative, though I admit that even so this is the most beautiful one. The animation in this one looked to be professional grade, and its sad that it was wasted on something so lacking substance-wise.

Try to be more creative, as the creep-factor alone just doesn't do it anymore. If you did that quality and style of animation for a decently long movie (even 20min.) that actually had a good plot/writing, you could probably even sell (downloads of) it for some pretty massive cash in the long term.

I don't get the jokes.

I really have no idea how any of that could be funny. That one satan guy was somewhat amusing, but it was all just too random and none of the characters to be able to connect.

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